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cannonfodder · 10-13-2008

Not too bad, but you should proof read more before you post. Also, its a little confusing bouncing from character to character so much.

10-13-2008	#2
cannonfodder redneckdemon Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wherever I happen to be at the moment. Usually drunk at the time, so details are hazy, at best. Posts: 141	Re: BE TG AP AR Story by klyphlord Not too bad, but you should proof read more before you post. Also, its a little confusing bouncing from character to character so much. __________________ http://redneckdemon.deviantart.com/