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cannonfodder · 10-13-2008

Oh, don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the descriptions, and the plot overall was just the way I like it: simple, fun, and not very long winded. I just think you your work would benifit greatly from a bit more time spent editing and proof-reading. I'm guilty of it myself, but one should never post a ruff draft. It's ruff, obviously, but if folks read it and have a problem with something, they may not want to read a finished and well polished piece later. Just my 2 cents.

10-13-2008	#4
cannonfodder redneckdemon Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Wherever I happen to be at the moment. Usually drunk at the time, so details are hazy, at best. Posts: 141	Re: BE TG AP AR Story by klyphlord Oh, don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the descriptions, and the plot overall was just the way I like it: simple, fun, and not very long winded. I just think you your work would benifit greatly from a bit more time spent editing and proof-reading. I'm guilty of it myself, but one should never post a ruff draft. It's ruff, obviously, but if folks read it and have a problem with something, they may not want to read a finished and well polished piece later. Just my 2 cents. __________________ http://redneckdemon.deviantart.com/