[tetsumi]

Quite right, there, Amahain. Just want to know if people enjoy the stories (and not in that way BlackVelvet). I want to know if the emotions seem realistic, if the TF has the right pace and feel, or if it seems like I left something out, if the descriptions seem accurate or off base, that kind of stuff. And just, is it well written? For that matter, just let me know if people are enjoying the stories! If people aren't really liking them, then I won't worry about posting them anymore. I can't really see if I've got an audience over here or not. Tons of people seem to read them on DA, so I was just trying to get a handle on whether or not they were being enjoyed over here.

And for those of you who have said you liked this one or others, thanks. I appreciate it.