For all those interested in bimboisation, I speak as the girlfriend of an MC fetish writer.
Have you checked out either the
Garden of MC or the
MC Forum? Both are riddled with writers and enthousiasts who like nothing more than MCing a girl into a complete bimbo, the MC Garden in particular. The Garden's management doesn't allow their members to give writers legitimate feedback though because it might hurt the writers' feelings. The MCF is the place to go for honest story reviews. They will ban you if you disagree with something a mod or admin does though so beware.
The MCF should be kissing the ground I walk on at the moment as my boyfriend and I were victim to their "Don't you dare disagree with us" policy and, now that their membership and posting is waaaaaaaaaaay down, I'm still pimping them out. Bitches!
Anyways, hope that helps. Happy perving, everyone!