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Originally Posted by TFCommando
The art is very nice, I particularly like the eyes and ears. The transition between page 3 and 4 is a bit abrupt. A narration box or thought balloon might have helped.
You should have someone proofread the dialogue... it is very awkward-sounding, enough that it distracts from the visuals.
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I believe the talks should have been more prepared, but well, that will be for the next
