Thanks, you two. I appreciate the feedback.
I was really proud of the little details along the way that I left to explain exactly how she made her escape. I hope that came through. It took me several hours to figure out all the mistakes he needed to make so that she could turn it around, without conflicting with his intellect and forethought.
At the end of both segments I figured the story had reached a nice conclusion, so while I don't have any ideas for a sequel, I'm always open to suggestions. If anyone wants to borrow the shrinking necklace or Madam Wanda for their own story or artwork, I'm more than willing to share them. Wanda needs the extra work anyway, the economy has hurt her ticket sales.
