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Unread 12-21-2008   #6
Reif
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Re: Fiction Contribution - To Bake a Christmas Cake

Lord Hawkeye...

I don't think its me. I pulled in fresh virus definitions and ran a full system scan with both Norton and Ad-Aware, neither found anything.

Have you been visiting deviantart lately? Occasionally my fire-wall starts getting pinged after I browse there.

Frice...

Yeah I see that now...thug using a 5 dollar word is not good...thanks for pointing that out, I'm not used to writing dumb characters and thats something I'm going to need to remind myself about going forward.

That inner monologue section went through about 2 or 3 rewrites and I still never got it to sound right. Probably my least favorite section.

zdarkness

AR isn't one of my bigger things, but if I do write some thats what its going to be, elderly to young. Not judging, but turning a young woman into a child has no appeal for me.

All

If you liked this but were put off by the length of my first story "The succubus' wedding night" give it a try.
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