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Originally Posted by turtlepie
I am calling it little due to its only 12 pages, most comics I do for the label I am on range from 20 to the 60+ one I am working on now.
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Technically, I still have to poke fun at it. Growth and Shrinking always seem to have 'little' and 'big' interspersed throughout even when it doesn't relate to what's going on in the content. The inverse usage is unexpected, but still related to the fetish yet describing something else.
However, there's really no way to avoid making the pun, now is there? It's just a habit of the English language.
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As for the corny dialog, i have yet to really find a fetish comic that does not have that to some degree. lol. Also this is like my first comic like this in four years. lol.
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Don't take it seriously. I was poking fun at myself there too. I hate looking back at my writing even if it were from 6 months ago. It's part of the endless cycle of revision.