Story Complete. Afterthoughts to come. Enjoy!
The Perfect Evolution
By SEGR
Foreword
Welcome to “The Perfect Evolution”, my second story submitted to the Process Forum. It’s been a while since I wrote "Incubusted" (link in sig), and I’m glad to be back with more. Like “Incubusted”, this is starting as a work in progress. I already finished a first draft, and have an almost complete second draft, but I am making some substantial changes part way through. I will be posting what I have ready to send out, and posting the rest as it comes to me (soon, oh so soon). Still, procrastination is hard to break and motivation can be a little difficult to find. I hope that the comments of the viewers will give me that extra push like it did in writing “Incubusted” to write the best story I can... and finish it!
“The Perfect Evolution” is a story set in the world of “Airpatrol”, a webcomic written and illustrated by Wolfman-Al (Link:
http://www.airpatrolonline.net/html/index_english.html). If you have read the webcomic, then my story should make sense. If you have not, then I recommend you read some of it, both for understanding my story and for its own merits. The setting is fascinating and it’s clear from talking with him and reading the notes on his forum that Al put a lot of thought into the setting’s background and the plot’s progression.
Basically, the setting is the near future, approximately 60 years from now. This fanfic is a self-contained story about a character of my own creation, Julia “Cranberry” Pawis, and it occurs chronologically previous to the events of the plot of Air Patrol. You can expect to see some references to places or characters you are familiar with in the setting, along with at least one character pulled directly from the setting itself, but the plot, the main character and most of the supporting cast are my own creations. Wolfman-Al was nice enough to be the editor of my story and his comments have been invaluable in making this story as well-constructed as it is.
You will notice, by the way, that many of the characters portrayed in this story have last names that are obviously puns. This isn’t my normal writing style, but the setting strongly supports it, so I decided to not deviate. Deviating would be a little like playing a game of D&D where the party consists of Alladria the Elf, Gorrim the Dwarf, Tzimmil the Tiefling, and Berny Smith the Dragonborn.
One more thing… I’m sure that many of you are going to be eager to see the Process happening in this story. There is plenty of it. You just have to actually read the story to see it happening. I like to think of the story standing on its own merits, and the transformation being another aspect of what makes the story strong, instead of a gimmick to get you to read the story and give a quick thumbs up. Also, I don’t care to describe or invent sexual encounters unless they are somehow relevant to the story. What I mean to say is that you should be able to enjoy this story for the plot and, hey, if you get your rocks off to something in it, well, consider that a bonus.
I will make a note in this opening paragraph when a new part of the story comes up.
Well, with that said, sit back and enjoy "The Perfect Evolution".