I was going pretty fast in this story as a result of me trying to get it done before the seasonal event it was based on passed. So I didn't put near the detail in to this one that I put into the Succubus' Wedding Night, for that I apologize if things got unclear.
The idea was that two long bubbles formed along his crotch and then swelled outward until they effectively enveloped his manhood. Then the whole arrangment effectively 'swallowed' and then deflated leaving him a woman between his legs. If youre still having trouble visualizing, the closest piece of graphic art that I've seen would be one by DPRagan which I've attached. Keep in mind though that his picture is a 'goo' situation while mine isn't and the pose and face would be completely different.
The navel piercing doesn't actually do anything in the story, its just garnish. Basically Mirabel adding that last extra 'oomph.'
I never did say if Holly had an accent, if you want to mentally give her a gentle brogue I wouldn't mind.
I'm about 33% done with my third story. It would be going faster if I would stop having great ideas which naturally have to be included.
