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LOD · 01-06-2009

Thank you so much for your detailed critique!!

I feel the need to explain what I was thinking about in the excerpt you posted from 'Life'. I was trying to create a monster. When I first introduced Gwen I made the mistake of making my audience feel too sorry for her. I figured that this scene might be a bit much, but I really needed to humanize her victims to make her a true villain.

01-06-2009	#5
LOD Tieing a Knot Or two Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Breaking Down The Walls Of Your Imagination. Posts: 19,660	Re: 2009: A Great New Year Thank you so much for your detailed critique!! I feel the need to explain what I was thinking about in the excerpt you posted from 'Life'. I was trying to create a monster. When I first introduced Gwen I made the mistake of making my audience feel too sorry for her. I figured that this scene might be a bit much, but I really needed to humanize her victims to make her a true villain. __________________ Claire's Project Last edited by LOD; 01-06-2009 at 08:34 PM.