[Chameo]

Hey wussy, i really enjoyed it, a very unique story all together. aside from a few grammer issues and one kinda confusing part, it was really tight.

When the robot died to her hands, it was a little confusing when u explained about how she came back with her endowments.

another thing is that when she is 1000 some feet tall, and you are describing her breasts as big as watermelons, I understand that that's proportionally, but its still kinda weird when i first read it.


really nice though.