[Keichan]

Just a suggestion, but I really think you should avoid random encounters, leveling, gold farming for equipment, and other traditional RPG elements...

I know it sounds strange, considering you're using RPGMaker, but in all honesty, I highly doubt that any of us want to grind to progress.

Also, I'd like to offer my assistance as an editor. I'm a fiction writing major at the University of Pittsburgh, and while I really doubt my ability to contribute additions to the script (considering it is your writing, chiefly, and our styles would clash pretty spectacularly) or what little I know about coding (I was initially a comp sci major, but Java killed my love for programming), I could, at the very least, contribute my expertise as an editor.

EDIT: Oh, and I love what you've done so far, it's fantastic, keep up the great work! :3