[julby]

Frice: Thanks for reading and responding so quickly. I initially had a scene at the end involving the new Captain Infinity (Ron), but took it out before posting it here.

Vengeance: thanks for politely informing me of the format difficulties.

Avenger: thanks for identifying a typo in the story. I was actually pretty worried that I'd be too inaccurate with my mythological references, but if that's the worst you could find, I guess it ended up okay.

The Pro: Thanks for the constructive criticism. Anything specific you'd have liked to have happen with her?

Xanderfox: Thanks for coming across as a bit of an ass-wipe there. But genuine question here: is there something about seeing it from a computer screen that makes it harder to read something without double-spacing or with paragraph tabs (printed book style) instead of carriage returns? If absolutely necessary, I guess I can reformat it.