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Shadowsbane99 · 05-19-2009

This video was much better. I mean it. You gave a sort of funny backstory, which explains what the 7 vials are, or at least alludes to them. The interaction between Bud and Taylor wasn't funny enough to make me laugh, but it was funny and cute enough to give the story a boost.

The premise was much better, the whole idea of the vials added with Taylor's obvious bit of sneakiness and willing to use other girls as guinea pigs of a sort makes the whole thing a lot more fun than a completely blank background.

As for the expansion itself, it was a whole lot better than the one before it. It showed real creativity in how the expansion happens, what funny cover up Taylor gave, and the sound effects were original too and in this case worked. You worked from subtle to noticeable and the asymmetry of the expansion, happening in bursts and switching between the boobs, great move.

The actress was much more varied, and felt much more genuine. I love how se commented not just on how big they are, but on other things like saying her waist looked smaller. She had more real reason to enjoy them because she felt they made her more beautiful overall, instead of being completely fixated on them being bigger like someone with a severe overcompensation complex. I also thought the clothing lended themselves to the expansion very well, the shape and behavior and all that.

You might end up losing points with some people since the growth stopped at a level that is somewhat shorter than most, but if you ask me I think you stopped at a great spot. Much more and I probably would have just skipped over the rest to the end. Again that is just me, I am one of the ones around here who prefer the more subtle BE that stops before they reach the size of their head and likes quality over quantity.

I can think of very few clips I enjoyed more. I would give this clip a 9 out of 10. Of the highest quality you can get without indulging some preferences of mine that are actually specific to me and not necessarily BE related. (See the Increased Beauty thread for what I prefer)

05-19-2009	#343
Shadowsbane99 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 286	Re: Mistress Taylor Presents BE Updates This video was much better. I mean it. You gave a sort of funny backstory, which explains what the 7 vials are, or at least alludes to them. The interaction between Bud and Taylor wasn't funny enough to make me laugh, but it was funny and cute enough to give the story a boost. The premise was much better, the whole idea of the vials added with Taylor's obvious bit of sneakiness and willing to use other girls as guinea pigs of a sort makes the whole thing a lot more fun than a completely blank background. As for the expansion itself, it was a whole lot better than the one before it. It showed real creativity in how the expansion happens, what funny cover up Taylor gave, and the sound effects were original too and in this case worked. You worked from subtle to noticeable and the asymmetry of the expansion, happening in bursts and switching between the boobs, great move. The actress was much more varied, and felt much more genuine. I love how se commented not just on how big they are, but on other things like saying her waist looked smaller. She had more real reason to enjoy them because she felt they made her more beautiful overall, instead of being completely fixated on them being bigger like someone with a severe overcompensation complex. I also thought the clothing lended themselves to the expansion very well, the shape and behavior and all that. You might end up losing points with some people since the growth stopped at a level that is somewhat shorter than most, but if you ask me I think you stopped at a great spot. Much more and I probably would have just skipped over the rest to the end. Again that is just me, I am one of the ones around here who prefer the more subtle BE that stops before they reach the size of their head and likes quality over quantity. I can think of very few clips I enjoyed more. I would give this clip a 9 out of 10. Of the highest quality you can get without indulging some preferences of mine that are actually specific to me and not necessarily BE related. (See the Increased Beauty thread for what I prefer)