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insomniac · 05-25-2009

Well I gotta say it was pretty good. The dialog needs work though- I'm not quite sure where, but it feels a little like picking random phrases off of a sheet of paper. Otherwise the clothing was spot on for both of them! I noticed only a little continuity where you could see Remy's panties while she has the extra-large pair on.

Personally I'd love to see more attention to the shrinkee's clothing, maybe get them to walk around and demonstrate their shorter height somehow?

05-25-2009	#62
insomniac SW Archivist Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 464	Re: Giantess Zone Shrinking Ladies Thread Well I gotta say it was pretty good. The dialog needs work though- I'm not quite sure where, but it feels a little like picking random phrases off of a sheet of paper. Otherwise the clothing was spot on for both of them! I noticed only a little continuity where you could see Remy's panties while she has the extra-large pair on. Personally I'd love to see more attention to the shrinkee's clothing, maybe get them to walk around and demonstrate their shorter height somehow?