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Originally Posted by pseudoclever
BTW, as much as I love all the positive comments, constructive criticism makes the next installment better.
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Well to tell you the truth you don't leave us with much to nitpick about. And I don't feel like making an ass out of myself for posting about minor spelling mistakes, which is the only flaw I seem to have found.
Anyways thank you so much for taking your time to write this awesome story. In the short amount of time you have been posting you've improved, which is amazing seeing how your first story was almost perfect. You have to love your use of the process and your writing style( Seriously Stephen King better watch out if you decide to take up writing horror
). Seriously your ability to write graphic sexual acts is enough to make a man jealous
Thank you again for all your hard work and I hope to see your next story up soon.