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bahamad · 06-26-2009

Hey All - So somewhere around 1k views but no comments tells me the piece was pretty...blah.

Was there a particular scene which could have improved to make the story less blase? Something so painfully stereotypical or dialogue so trite you stopped reading?

Sorry to be feedback whore, but I really would like to improve at this and that's tough to do without knowing what the audience would like to see.

Thanks

06-26-2009	#2
bahamad Lousy No-Good Lurker Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 67	Re: Fruits of Destiny - When It Rains, It Pours Hey All - So somewhere around 1k views but no comments tells me the piece was pretty...blah. Was there a particular scene which could have improved to make the story less blase? Something so painfully stereotypical or dialogue so trite you stopped reading? Sorry to be feedback whore, but I really would like to improve at this and that's tough to do without knowing what the audience would like to see. Thanks