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Pheonixflare · 06-26-2009

Alright, the bus in the beginning seemed kind of cheasy. The other thing is that "-----" seemed really bad it didn't explain it at all. It made it hard to follow who you were at, or where you were. You know? I liked the characterization but I didn't like the ending part where the transformation begins, it didn't get explained much. I understand the mystery of it but why was she morphing other people?

06-26-2009	#4
Pheonixflare Lurker Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 13	Re: Fruits of Destiny - When It Rains, It Pours Alright, the bus in the beginning seemed kind of cheasy. The other thing is that "-----" seemed really bad it didn't explain it at all. It made it hard to follow who you were at, or where you were. You know? I liked the characterization but I didn't like the ending part where the transformation begins, it didn't get explained much. I understand the mystery of it but why was she morphing other people?