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Unread 07-29-2009   #4
Sephie
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Re: Curse of the Black Werewoman

Quotation marks are your friend.

I personally would prefer a more fleshed out character but a lot of people have objected to this request when I have made it in the past.

The description is a bit cliched. I dislike it when people say that the lips became pouty. This should refer to the expression not the plumpness of the lips.

A bit much profanity for my personal tastes.
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