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Originally Posted by Lightfoot
One comment I would have is that on the second page, it seem to me that panels 2 and 3 could be switched. That the second panel chronologically should be beside the first panel, not below it.
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Well unless the grows was like a pulse growing and deflating and then growing even larger. ^^
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Originally Posted by Lightfoot
I also agree with Suibaru. Dialog isn't required, but it seems odd without sound effects.
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Not just the sound effect, just to fill in the empty space.
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BTW, lucky groom.