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lurker101 · 09-30-2009

The story is definitely entertaining however I have one big issue with it, and that was when you initially described it as a slow growth story. Jumping from 4 foot whatever to 5'11 is hardly slow growth in my opinion. Once the character reaches abnormal heights, the novelty of slow growth at that point is diminished to some people (the dudes who dont like it when the girls become huge giants but enjoy more realistic settings.... kind of like how a lot of people cross the line when a girl gets too muscular and veiny; gross. Therefore what im trying to say is one way to improve the story is to focus more on the 4-6 foot range next time, and then of course grow the character to your hearts desire, and all will be pleased. Your work is much appreciated.

09-30-2009	#48
lurker101 Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 39	Re: A Growing Flower (new slow growth story) The story is definitely entertaining however I have one big issue with it, and that was when you initially described it as a slow growth story. Jumping from 4 foot whatever to 5'11 is hardly slow growth in my opinion. Once the character reaches abnormal heights, the novelty of slow growth at that point is diminished to some people (the dudes who dont like it when the girls become huge giants but enjoy more realistic settings.... kind of like how a lot of people cross the line when a girl gets too muscular and veiny; gross. Therefore what im trying to say is one way to improve the story is to focus more on the 4-6 foot range next time, and then of course grow the character to your hearts desire, and all will be pleased. Your work is much appreciated.