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GearRyu · 08-06-2006

*Chuckle* Humorous. Nice title. Good shading. My one piece of constructive criticism is my suggestion to place the gray-haired girl's balloon beneath that of the blonde's, for better aesthetical reading.

08-06-2006	#6
GearRyu Be Amused Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 1,712	Chuckle Humorous. Nice title. Good shading. My one piece of constructive criticism is my suggestion to place the gray-haired girl's balloon beneath that of the blonde's, for better aesthetical reading. __________________ Now accepting story commissions. My TG/BE/TF/SW story, "The Reluctant Salesman": http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=20765 My BE/MG/GTS story, "The Perfect Evolution": http://www.process-productions.com/f...fect+evolution My TG/BE Story, "Incubusted": http://www.process-productions.com/f...ght=incubusted