Mmmm, just read through this over the last half hour. Reif, every story you release just makes waiting for the next one harder to bear. Each one is truly excellent and this is no exception.
I agree with Frice in that expounding on Jonathan's part in the transformation would have been a way to heighten the feel of the story, I also agree that (in light of Succubus' Wedding Night) avoiding it allowed you to find other ways to work the story. So weighing the choices I'm happy you chose that path too.
I patiently (HAH what lies...<_< >_>) await Hunter 2.