What! You have never seen Blade Runner until now!
How is it possible?
Okay, to your story:
(BEWARE OF SPOILERS!!!!!!!! if you haven't read the story, yet)
At the beginning of chapter 6, Drazz’mik "fuck ups" were quite annoying. I didn't had an expression that he was now a she.
The final fight was cool, but I was qute disappointed that Drazz’mik parents killed the succubus but let the big fish swim away.
That Drazz’mik had to stay as a woman served him right, though I could imagine that his mother would turned mad, because her little boy was now a girl like "that's happens if you playing with demons" (what she unfortunately not did).
The most awesome part was the inner conflict between Alex-F and Alex-M.
Summary: The story was great, though the last chapter could be worked out a little more, and gives a glimpse of hope for an sequal.
Captain Ash