Re: Four Types of Reactions (Mini-GTS/Slow/18+)
"...because his work was head and shoulders above the competition..."
Yeah. Since it was pictures of Bella, LITERALLY. *rimshot*
And "Big Bella." Heh. Makes me think of the term "Big Bertha," as applied to massive artillery. Then again I guess Bella does have two big guns. *rimshot* Alright, I'll stop.
And what would I say if I'd paid $25 for a hardcover book of this? "SHIT! That was pretty damn short for $25!" On a more serious note, I mean, you've got teh s3xiness down to an art. Maybe--maybe--it could use a little more clothes-bursting growth, and you still make a few spelling/grammar errors here and there. Other than that I don't really have much in the way of criticism.
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