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Unread 12-07-2009   #9
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Re: A moment forever (TG, AP)

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Originally Posted by frice2000 View Post
I didn't really like the accelerated aging of the girl at the end though...didn't feel right should have had a chance at a better childhood.
I'm going to agree with him. No matter how old you make the girl in appearance, she's still a child. Therefore, you're making Yurix into some sick pervert.

If anything, it would've made more sense to make Nikki become Yurix's partner, complete with personality change. That way, Yurix has a partner and Karyn can become his adoptive daughter.
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