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ZantetsukenX · 12-22-2009

When expanding world's collide was very interesting. It was well done, but I feel that the ending came too quickly. It was very sudden the whole introduction of a bad guy and resolution all in a matter of pages. But over all I definitely enjoyed all the chapters.

12-22-2009	#3
ZantetsukenX Process Fan Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 99	Re: Feedback on "Changing and Growing in Las Vegas" When expanding world's collide was very interesting. It was well done, but I feel that the ending came too quickly. It was very sudden the whole introduction of a bad guy and resolution all in a matter of pages. But over all I definitely enjoyed all the chapters.