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Roy · 12-22-2009

The next part's up? *zooms off*

5 minutes later...

Ah, is goooood. I liked Expanding Worlds, with this one I feel there's a lot of text to read, making it more story driven? Creates deeper characters? I also find it hard to read the scottish lass' accented text unless I zoom a little in.

I have to be honest and say the feeling of a 'wall of text' got to me in some parts and i've skipped some speech bubbles but think i have the jist of what's going on.

All in all still very good though. This last part cuts off at the perfect moment, can't wait for the next one!

12-22-2009	#4
Roy Constructive Posterererer Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Australia Posts: 198	Re: Feedback on "Changing and Growing in Las Vegas" The next part's up? zooms off 5 minutes later... Ah, is goooood. I liked Expanding Worlds, with this one I feel there's a lot of text to read, making it more story driven? Creates deeper characters? I also find it hard to read the scottish lass' accented text unless I zoom a little in. I have to be honest and say the feeling of a 'wall of text' got to me in some parts and i've skipped some speech bubbles but think i have the jist of what's going on. All in all still very good though. This last part cuts off at the perfect moment, can't wait for the next one!