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Unread 12-24-2009   #6
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Re: Feedback on "Changing and Growing in Las Vegas"

Well so far so good. I like the way the story is progressing.
My only qualms are the font and text. I am normally use to the basic comic font or acme font, but this new font is a bit annoying. As well I would agree with Roy about the wordyness.
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