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Originally Posted by DangerousDave
I actually like feedback like this. I put effort into the plot, so I like it when someone notices more than the naked ladies (who are of course the main focus, I won't deny that).
To answer your question Max, I'll repost a few earlier images:
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Indeed. It's true that Rob won't like to make public what happened to him. The embarrasment alone will be horrible for him to suffer and making at Rachel part of it won't be something he will like to do.
Still, not for that, he will let at Sydney do what she pleases. He needed to show at Sydney that if she tries to take advantage of him, the one that can end lossing more will be her. Thing you wonderfully add by changing v17.
I do like your change as it will put in aleart at Sydney and she won't feel so winner and dominant. Of course, it's possible that she has an as under her sleeve as she took at Dr. Pym with her.
The story is getting quite good my friend and I will be looking forward for the next part.
Max