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Fake_Name · 01-02-2010

Strippers again.... As a story aspect, they've been done absolutely to death, and then the corpse was dug up and fucked for a while.

I really like the setting for the expansion, and I think the whole "otaku" aspect could be really interesting if you ran with it (particularly with the clothes transformation bit). But then, right when things looked to be getting interesting, everything falls back into the tired old trope of a "strip-off".

Get away from the whole "running away from home and winding up as a striper" aspect of the plot, or really anything involving strippers at all, and it could be genuinely excellent.

01-02-2010	#8
Fake_Name Archives everything Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Fake_Place Posts: 680	Re: Feedback on "Changing and Growing in Las Vegas" Strippers again.... As a story aspect, they've been done absolutely to death, and then the corpse was dug up and fucked for a while. I really like the setting for the expansion, and I think the whole "otaku" aspect could be really interesting if you ran with it (particularly with the clothes transformation bit). But then, right when things looked to be getting interesting, everything falls back into the tired old trope of a "strip-off". Get away from the whole "running away from home and winding up as a striper" aspect of the plot, or really anything involving strippers at all, and it could be genuinely excellent.