Re: The Succubus' For Better or For Worse Part 2 of the Succubus Bride
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Originally Posted by Reif
The idea was at this point that with Mirabel's help she's not burning through essence nearly as fast anymore. She's in control of her succubus side and has been, she's never seriously been at the point where she might grab a guy off the street and break her vows BUT as shown in the story it can be very distracting to her.
The idea on the tradeshow, which I may need to go back and clarify was that it happened so fast that Zoe hadn't had time to internalize the thought process of Mirabel's warning. Also she got tasked directly by the CEO of her company, how does she say no? Her realization at the end is not really "Oh I'm going to do something I shouldn't," it is "OH CRAP, I'm in the middle of a potential succubus buffett"
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Sorry about misunderstanding the ending. It's not the first time I made two different speculations and failed to accept the obvious. Like the ending of season 3 of Lost.
Just don't turn her back into a dude...or if you do, don't make it permanent. For some reason I picture 'Zach' as Seth Rogen. Not that I find him repulsive, but I think it would ruin the potential marriage of Scott and Zoe if it happened.
Alright I admit. I don't like beautiful girls becoming sub par boys. Bishonen I can accept, but not below average.
But write the story the way you want it to end anyway.
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Right now Wendy, Mirabel, and the Witch from FN9 are all part of the Succubus universe. I am not going to link the Succubus and Hunter universes because that would make things VERY unwieldy. Remember Mirabel already put in an appearance in TBACC. My long term plan is for once the Succubus Arc ends to keep these Witches active around a central theme. Zoe knows that shes giving Mirabel some serious mojo, but she can't and wouldn't know that 100% pure succubus essence is like weaponized plutonium to a Witch. I assure you that Mirabel has plans for those vials
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Alright. So the witch from FN9 will make a cameo then? And with Mirabel, I remember you referring to her in the story as having black hair, yet you later referred to her as being old, and I wasn't sure if the story takes place before or after her 'Age regression'.
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