[Kuroneko]

Got it.

Honestly, not all that impressed. Grim's art is great, but there are some pretty serious flaws in there that would need correcting before I could really recommend this to anyone.

It's so short. Even for 20 pages, it just feels short. I was hoping for some kind of growth fight or something which is what it sounded like, but each girl got one good growth scene and then it was done. I realize that the way it was drawn with two page spreads doesn't really lend itself to storytelling, but you could read and perfectly understand this thing in 5 seconds if you weren't stopping to oggle the boobs. I don't know how your payment to Grim is worked out, but I really think it needed more pages, even if that made it cost more, or alternatively just use halves instead of making it all wide. The whole thing was just not very satisfactory and left me with an "Oh, that's it?" feeling.

My main pet peeve is reference. Other than the other girl, there is no reference to be able to judge size in this. No background, no onlookers, not even a tree. In practical terms that means that once they've both grown, there is no way to actually tell that they're giant, or how big they are. They might as well have been 1 foot tall and grown to normal size, because the only difference is that now they have bigger boobs. I couldn't even tell whether they were still big or had shrunk down on the last page. It was very disappointing for me, because basically at page 16 it stopped being a giantess sequence and turned into two naked chicks with big tits fighting. That might be good but it is not what I paid for.