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Silver Spoon · 03-19-2010

Sorry to be the voice of complaint, but I wasn't too impressed with this.

First, the highlights: The art is good. The characters are faithful looking to the original manga. The way you made it so that Orihime HAD to stay with Ichigo was also well thought out. Also, I could tell the size difference between Orihime and Ichigo pretty easily, and how small she really is in comparison to him.

My beef is with the ratio of shrinking versus sex. Much like in the Doll Cosplayer series, it's a few pages of shrink (in this case, a VERY rushed 3), and then the rest is the tiny girl playing / being orgasmic with the male character's body, most notably the penis. (Call me critical if you want, but seeing a giant penis in fetish art turns me off from it somewhat.) It almost feels like at times that I'm buying the same project from Jitensha each time, only with different faces, processes, and final page outcomes.

I also think the characters are a wee bit young for this kind of thing, but I think that's only me that feels that way.

03-19-2010	#10
Silver Spoon Mostly gone Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Philadelphia, PA Posts: 2,122	Re: New Comic: "Bleach: Orihime's New Perspective" Sorry to be the voice of complaint, but I wasn't too impressed with this. First, the highlights: The art is good. The characters are faithful looking to the original manga. The way you made it so that Orihime HAD to stay with Ichigo was also well thought out. Also, I could tell the size difference between Orihime and Ichigo pretty easily, and how small she really is in comparison to him. My beef is with the ratio of shrinking versus sex. Much like in the Doll Cosplayer series, it's a few pages of shrink (in this case, a VERY rushed 3), and then the rest is the tiny girl playing / being orgasmic with the male character's body, most notably the penis. (Call me critical if you want, but seeing a giant penis in fetish art turns me off from it somewhat.) It almost feels like at times that I'm buying the same project from Jitensha each time, only with different faces, processes, and final page outcomes. I also think the characters are a wee bit young for this kind of thing, but I think that's only me that feels that way. Last edited by Silver Spoon; 03-19-2010 at 10:33 PM.