Actually I'm working on that portion now, well sorta, I'm stumbling through my writers block but I will finish it! **holds fist skyward triumphantly with a determined look on face** Chapter 5 and on is Mirlinth getting her just rewards on Sevikira. I was more worried with the characterization of the characters and making them strong enough people.
What parts in the process change would you have liked to see to make it better? And any other ideas you have would be helpful as well.
Thanks for the honest feed back.
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