Re: Invasion of the...wait what are these things?
well it seems like a good start. A nice solid base to start with, and could read it with out having to wonder if you graduated high school; so the grammar passed my initial reading test. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Im almost positive the artist of that X in a cube is the internet.
DAM YOU SKYNET!!!!!! DAM YOU AND ALL YOUR INFERNAL STOPLIGHTS!!
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