[CaptainSanji]

Well, I thought this story had been left to die shortly before I quit lurking, but since it seems to have re-surged, I shall offer my thoughts!

First, gotta love the story. What seems to be Maddie's slow acceptance of her situation is really making it more realistic as opposed to the types of stories where women are suddenly expanded only to go from terrified to hornier than a rabbit in heat in the time it takes to blink. As Vid said, giving each and every character their own depth and personality makes it even more fun.

The way that the restaurant itself is portrayed as highly respectable, and showing off their processed waitresses at a dignified level, rather than trotting them out as simply cheap tarts to be ogled and groped at also makes this unique from other BE type stories I've read. The way the trouble-makers from the previous chapter were dealt with is solid proof of that.

Finally, the process!!! I personally think many people can write process, but only a handful can write it well, and this story performs admirably in that respect. The illustrations help a lot, but the way it is written could perform on its own if it had to.

Just thought I'd let you know you are appreciated. As a writer myself (fanfiction, no process) I know how much feedback means!