Sorry, couldn't ignore the plot because it was interesting, gave some good character development, and helped tie things together. A quite different approach to the whole She-Hulk mythos...I like the twist behind just how Jennifer arrived to serve as Kyle's protection. Also like the spin that was put on Kyle's reaction to seeing Jen's dark secret - different than many stories and, really, probably more realistic. Nice character interaction and descriptions of their unique personalities, quirks, etc.
I don't want to say too much that could spoil things for those who haven't read it yet. I enjoyed this one even more than the other (and agreed, this story's title = better). Thanks for posting it up.