[monomonkey]

Ok, well, I didn't end up getting help :<

This is a "as good as I can do it" translation of the story posted two weeks ago.

If the story ever feels convoluted, there are two explanations for it. One is that the writer was over-complicating the details, trying to tie in various elements into the story to make it more appealing as an actual story rather than just a sex story. The other is that I'm just a terrible translator. Personally, I feel like it's a bith of both.

I cut a few things from the story that just didn't fit well with the story. Whether it was because I did a poor job translating it or it just didn't make sense remains to be seen. The entire last page didn't make any sense to me at all, so I dropped it. It wasn't part of the story anyway.

I spent the most effort trying to get the actual "interesting" scenes explained properly, and I feel like I succeeded. Feel free to tell me if any part of it doesn't make sense.

I don't know why I write long posts to try to justify my translations, but this one's ending here. Enjoy the story! I know I did.