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Originally Posted by talon6419
LUV the way this script ran through my head!
As far as feedback, the scene where her pants and undies finally loose purchase, and is replaced by her shirt tail. If you're adverse to nudity okay, BUT if not, but you still don't want frontal nudity, how about just a brief little tush shot before the shirt tail drops, as a not amused Renee smirks. 
tal  |
Glad you liked it.
I'm still interested in developing this as a comic, so we'll see how things progress.