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Esquire · 07-17-2010

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I like it. I'm not much into standard TG, and I skipped over most of the sex scenes-which I tend to do when I read anything-and your writing style is a bit...oblique, but the character development is sound and the plotting is tight. And the entire premise sounds like something I would write; "You get to be a succubus! Have fun with having every man on the planet objectify you and not take you seriously because you have big tits! Not to mention the demon responsible for your change planning to use you as a pawn in some scheme! Oh, and you may be involuntarily changing those around you. Just a little."

One question; Zoe's change into an angel seems, at first glance, like a Deus Ex Machina. Then I remember that said phrase translates to "god in the machine". Then I lol'd.

07-17-2010	#7
Esquire Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 204	Re: The Succubus' Vows - Part 3 of The Succubus Bride Trilogy Spoilers I like it. I'm not much into standard TG, and I skipped over most of the sex scenes-which I tend to do when I read anything-and your writing style is a bit...oblique, but the character development is sound and the plotting is tight. And the entire premise sounds like something I would write; "You get to be a succubus! Have fun with having every man on the planet objectify you and not take you seriously because you have big tits! Not to mention the demon responsible for your change planning to use you as a pawn in some scheme! Oh, and you may be involuntarily changing those around you. Just a little." One question; Zoe's change into an angel seems, at first glance, like a Deus Ex Machina. Then I remember that said phrase translates to "god in the machine". Then I lol'd. __________________ FA\|sofurry\|dA\|Weasyl Latest: "Bonk, bonk!"