[frice2000]

For me I would've liked to see the newly born kitsuneish girl struggle with her new form and gender a bit more. Maybe also some interactions with her changed partner the wolf. How much personality is still there from both of them would've been of interest. Still with how you had it structured guess that would be difficult. You're right though I do usually get frustrated with your stories because the endings usually leave a few too many questions. The only ones you've written that i can point to and say that ended nicely and logically without nagging questions are Aryll's first story and Hawkeye's first story. Both of those ended very nicely resolving your open plot threads while leaving room for a sequel. Most of your others just scream for more filling in before their ends.