Re: mind control, bimbo transformation
Thanks guys ^^; Crap, thought I'd covered all the spelling mistakes.
Admittedly there were a few parts that could have been structured slightly better, but I think it was a solid sequel.
Going by the laws of film though, I don't think I can keep that same originality going for a 3rd.
Think it makes the most sense just keep it as the two with the 3rd being something the readers can imagine for themselves, and perhaps move on to another story.
Part of me wants to do something sci-fi based, or possibly straight up B-Movie plot.
Invasion of the body snatchers, Stepford, The Faculty, something along these lines with maybe an element of Jekyll and Hyde (mainly around the split personality disorder) added.
Last edited by robiotic; 08-01-2010 at 07:38 AM.
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