Re: mind control, bimbo transformation
It's wonderfully written, like everything you produce. And I like the more fetishistic aspects that are probably outside your comfort zone. But two things 1. There's not enough fight in the girl (the best example of this was probably Calving Signs, but it didn't quite hit my fetishes. Could still appreciate it though.) and 2. I dislike the transformations largely being about overt sex. I like physical and (fiercely resisted) psychological changes.
But this is all about taste. Just depends on what you're looking for. And like I said, it's very well written. You produce probably the best erotica I've ever read.
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