Re: mind control, bimbo transformation
I still think a dumbing down could go well, but it doesn't seem to be executed well that often. A lot of drama in a character losing such vital and personal power. It seems like most stories where the girl actually becomes stupid are just quick, two page affairs meant for a quick view and then never to be read again. Sort of paint by numbers and generic, with very little characterization.
Which is a damn shame, because I love it. The only thing that could substitute it for me is forcing the girl to act stupid without being that way herself. But I have trouble finding good renditions of that too.
Come to think of it, there's a dearth of good written porn in general. I think I just have really high standards.
EDIT: I just realized there's one great example of the loss of intelligence creating drama and a good story: Flowers for Algernon. Throw in some ridiculous gender stereotypes, blond hair, and big tits, and you have an awesome bimbo story.
Last edited by The-Pro; 08-04-2010 at 11:50 AM.
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