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Vengeance1701 · 08-05-2010

It's not that I DISLIKE his longer stuff, it's just that the stuff I do like loses a bit of an edge to me when it's so spread out. I like it spread out but maybe with less focus on ALL the characters... kinda like Hornies did. Lots of implied TFs, one TF explored at some length (the poor bunnygirl) and one in depth (our herione).

Man in Room Ten kinda illustrates my point. I (recognize I do not intend to say this should be a universal feeling and is just my own) thought the focus got a little diluted with all the different storylines being played out in the hotel.

08-05-2010	#604
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: mind control, bimbo transformation It's not that I DISLIKE his longer stuff, it's just that the stuff I do like loses a bit of an edge to me when it's so spread out. I like it spread out but maybe with less focus on ALL the characters... kinda like Hornies did. Lots of implied TFs, one TF explored at some length (the poor bunnygirl) and one in depth (our herione). Man in Room Ten kinda illustrates my point. I (recognize I do not intend to say this should be a universal feeling and is just my own) thought the focus got a little diluted with all the different storylines being played out in the hotel. __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.