With permission from tcb, I've edited the text for grammar and spelling, and done some very minor reworking of the dialogue so it reads a bit better. I also did a little bit of cleanup on the speech balloons so now they don't look like random oddly-shaped white blobs (giving the uncomfortable impression that somebody's fapping got a little out of control. I kid, tcb, I kid.
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Anyway, here you go then. Thanks again to tcb for creating this in the first place. Looking forward to seeing more!