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Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto
muscle expansion
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Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto
breast expansion
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Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto
and yuri story
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I smell epic win here.
I've just read the first chapter. It's kind of amazing how you managed to put ALL the clich? of the sentai/mahou genre in it. It may sound like a bad thing, but it's actually cool to read a perfect transposition of a Sailor Moon episode (including chibi stuff) featuring muscles, boobs and swords instead of staff and ribbons.
The line << "My muscles and boobs are so big now," she said. "I look like a freak. >> seemed a bit out of place though. She was very happy of her muscles only a few lines before.