Ah, I am very glad you liked the first chapter! Yes, I was going for the magical girl warrior and sentai feeling for the story. I the rest is as good to you.
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Originally Posted by j2k
The line << "My muscles and boobs are so big now," she said. "I look like a freak. >> seemed a bit out of place though. She was very happy of her muscles only a few lines before.
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About that, Kokoro is meant to be a very typical Japanese girl, and the majority of Japanese girls want to seem small in height and weight. Kokoro thinks her muscles and breasts feel good, but she's also doubtful because her R?surrection body looks abnormal by mainstream tastes. It is something she will need to overcome.